An easy tip to improve your storytelling –

A member of the writing community posted how he was giving too much information. It’s not just him, though.

Most of us struggle with this. We convey too much information.

But more information does not lead to more resonance. In fact, you end up overwhelming your audience. You lose a chance to connect with them.

Subtract, don’t add. Don’t give information. Show a single transformation.

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